Proportions Study 1

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Vision: 4
I can really get a message from this. The expression on her face, and her stance make the piece pop.

Originality: 3.5/4
Slightly lower score on this part. It seems that I see stuff like this everywhere. However, you seemed to make it something new, and I commend you for that.

Technique: 4.5
She is lovely, and very proportionally sound. The effect with lighting is very good, and attention to detail is essential to this piece.

Impact: 4.5/5
You really stepped away from your usual paintings (not that there's anything wrong with them), and tried something new. Personally, I think she is greatly drawn, with accessories, and a facial expression that show your determination, an admirable trait. I could see this part of a video game/movie.

Overall: 4
This piece was good. There was really nothing "bad" about it, but I see some small things that could be changed. Such as the physics (which I can never get right, its hard). It seems that she appears to be somewhat floating/suspended by a harness. I also noticed that her legs are a bit to long for her torso, but its hardly noticeable. All in all, its a good piece. Keep working